On the whole, this report is very good, but there are a few points that need clarifying. The report could use more detail in the foreign sales section.

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On the whole, this report is very good, but there are a few points that need clarifying.  The report could use more detail in the foreign sales section.

전체적으로 보았을때 이 보고서는 아주 좋지만 명확히 해야 할 부분이 몇군데 있네요.

 

Dear Jason,

Thanks for sending the report through.

On the whole, this report is very good, but there are a few points that need clarifying.

The report could use more detail in the foreign sales section.

Would you come up to my office whenever you have a moment so we can go through it?

Thanks,

Coco

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Dear Jason,

Thanks for sending the report through.
보내준 보고서는 잘 보았습니다.

On the whole, this report is very good, but there are a few points that need clarifying.
전체적으로 보았을때 이 보고서는 아주 좋지만 명확히 해야 할 부분이 몇군데 있네요.

The report should use more detail in the foreign sales section.
해외 판매 분과에 대해 좀 더 자세한 내용을 넣어야 할것 같습니다.

Would you come up to my office whenever you have a moment so we can go through it?
시간 나면 내 사무실에 올라와 그 부분에 대하여 이야기 해 볼래요?

 

Coco